aha this old head missed that cheers still cold damp miserable here
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On 12/04/2018 15:32, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> Ah, thanks all. For me, the beckoning hand was in the carriage or limousine door, & the alley was an escape route…
>
> Hmmnnn…
>
> Doug
>
>> On Apr 12, 2018, at 3:13 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> Eek it outside my place now six horses in my cul de sac tricky
>>
>> not sure about the last verse isn't the hand beckoning in?? for a final trip?
>>
>>
>> On 11/04/2018 19:30, Sheila Murphy wrote:
>>> Doug, this is a strong image followed by a far-preferred suggestion that
>>> captures the focus. The better choice.
>>>
>>> Thank you! Sheila
>>>
>>> On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 10:50 AM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> an ancient black carriage
>>>> its six white horses
>>>> or a modern stretch limousine
>>>>
>>>> a door opening
>>>> a beckoning hand
>>>>
>>>> just step aside into this alley
>>>> for another few years
>>>>
>>>> that’s the way to go
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Douglas Barbour
>>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>
>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> There is no real
>>>> world, my friends.
>>>> Why not, then
>>>> let the stars
>>>> shine in our bones?
>>>>
>>>> Robert Kroetsch
>>>>
> Douglas Barbour
> [log in to unmask]
> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>
> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>
> There is no real
> world, my friends.
> Why not, then
> let the stars
> shine in our bones?
>
> Robert Kroetsch
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