Thanks, Patrick, Doug. I don’t mind the rhythmic adjustment in the final
line - it is intended to draw up sharply. Sort of parodying legendary Aus
song by Slim Dusty: Pub with no beer.
Bill
On Thu, 15 Mar 2018 at 3:45 am, Patrick McManus <
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> thanks Bill I did get a bit mixed up ! I suppose the bed being male
> instead of it ? then I got mixed up with it being a traveller!
>
> it's being 79 today that's my problem got a nice local writers do tonight
>
>
>
> On 13/03/2018 21:27, Bill Wootton wrote:
> > This month, a smart town apartment
> >
> > Victorian terrace the month before
> >
> >
> > French style boudoir before that
> >
> > Californian bungalow sleepout next
> >
> >
> > He’s anyone’s for white sheets
> >
> > plumped up pillows, cushion piles
> >
> >
> > sleek pressed doonas
> >
> > The estate agents’ glamour boy
> >
> >
> > Looking the snooze part -
> >
> > but don’t you dare lie on him.
> >
> >
> > bw
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