Hey, Bill, 'in' is the only part I didn't like! It deflects the mood
established. Just my MOR thought.
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On 11 January 2018 at 13:04, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Like particularly the moon hanging in there, Doug.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 11 Jan 2018 at 3:02 pm, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > Such a welcome and clear moment, Doug. Uplifting and grounded at once.
> > Thank you! Sheila
> >
> > On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 3:30 PM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> > > the moon hangs low
> > > beyond the barren trees
> > >
> > > ladder to the waxing
> > > waning light
> > >
> > > ladder to the faraway
> > > stars planets
> > >
> > > revolving far beyond
> > > our tech yet
> > >
> > > the moon hangs (in) there
> > > filling the mind awake
> > >
> > >
> > > Douglas Barbour
> > > [log in to unmask]
> > > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> > >
> > > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
> Continuations
> > > 2 (UofAPress).
> > > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> > > Listen. If (UofAPress):
> > >
> > >
> > > Swept snow, Li Po,
> > > by dawn’s 40-watt moon
> > > to the road that hies to office
> > > away from home.
> > >
> > > Lorine Niedecker
> > >
> >
>
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