Well, Doug, Andrew, I just took it as filling the (visual) space,
establishing connection, if you like, before the line about filling the
mind. But maybe the notion of waiting (hanging in there) is distracting.
Your call, Doug.
Bill
On Fri, 12 Jan 2018 at 3:58 am, Patrick McManus <
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> cheers Douglas -filling my mind awake
>
>
> On 10/01/2018 22:30, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> > the moon hangs low
> > beyond the barren trees
> >
> > ladder to the waxing
> > waning light
> >
> > ladder to the faraway
> > stars planets
> >
> > revolving far beyond
> > our tech yet
> >
> > the moon hangs (in) there
> > filling the mind awake
> >
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
> Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> > Listen. If (UofAPress):
> >
> >
> > Swept snow, Li Po,
> > by dawn’s 40-watt moon
> > to the road that hies to office
> > away from home.
> >
> > Lorine Niedecker
>
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