Support what you day here, Andrew. The turn would keep turning, not
cliffhanger at all.
Bill
On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 5:39 pm, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Great rhythmic dance. T'would be fine if it circled like a spinning wheel -
> it's impossible to print it as a moving wheel but it would be good to imply
> it by the typesetting.
>
> Andrew
>
> On 19 October 2017 at 14:17, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Thanks, Doug,
> >
> > This is lovely in its turning and the syllabic opening out then
> > falling back - and great last line
> >
> > Jill
> > ________________________
> > Jill Jones
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> >
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> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
> > To:
> > Cc:
> > Sent:Wed, 18 Oct 2017 12:06:47 -0600
> > Subject:snap another small song
> >
> > turn turn frostburn
> > red & yellow leaves yearn
> > toward their defeat
> > retreat repeat
> > slow the fall to
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
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> > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
> > Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> > Listen. If (UofAPress):
> >
> > There was the usual amount of corruption, intimidation, and rioting.
> >
> > Sir Charles Petrie
> >
> >
>
>
> --
> Andrew
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