Patrick,
Very precise rendering, though I feel the need for one word describing the exact shade of colouration. When I sort out which bunch of grapes to buy from the grocery, I know the indicators of overripe but rarely see "just/turning" in any context.
Barry
On Wed, 23 Aug 2017 11:00:31 +0100, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>Bill thanks that first tinge very exciting -I liked trying the play
>with 'turning' -and spinning out single word like the gradual process of
>ripening
>
>-looking forward to when they are ripe!P
>
>
>On 23/08/2017 09:59, Bill Wootton wrote:
>> Good on those turning grapes, Patrick. Like the one-word reveals too.
>>
>> Bill
>>
>> On Wed, 23 Aug 2017 at 6:13 pm, Patrick McManus <
>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>>> *AUGUST 23^th *
>>>
>>> outside
>>>
>>> my
>>>
>>> bedroom
>>>
>>> window
>>>
>>> the
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>>> grapes
>>>
>>> are
>>>
>>> just
>>>
>>> turning
>>>
>>> /pmcmanus/
>>>
>>> /s194/
>>>
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