Fair call, Andrew. Patrick, I suppose I didn't mind if the poem was
available of your reading with absent or 'entertaining' mother. Will leave
out punctuation still - blunt feelings - but here is version 2:
early on 2
wake small
big room
behind bars
far bed
man snores
bed creaks
why there
never asked
Uncle Tom
his house
maybe Mum
put me
his room
all along
bw
12.7.17
Bill
On Wed, 12 Jul 2017 at 7:29 PM, Patrick McManus <
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> aha I read before your explanation should there be a question mark after
> he there?? and agree with break
>
> never asked has some confusion who asked you or him oh well I am cat
> sitting and one has turned up after going awol for five days -phew!! not
> look good to lose 'Henry' he brought back a furry present!!
>
>
> On 12/07/2017 10:20, Patrick McManus wrote:
> > Bill I read as she single mum with guest -or a father who is always
> > away -intriguing -layout looks like one of mine :-)
> >
> >
> > On 12/07/2017 02:18, Bill Wootton wrote:
> >> wake small
> >> big room
> >> behind bars
> >> man snores
> >> sour smell
> >> why mum
> >> he there
> >> flatbacked
> >> never asked
> >> just occurred
> >> maybe I
> >> put there
> >> his room
> >> all along
> >>
> >> bw
>
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