Very intriguing, Bill, to see the line breaks and the shifts in feeling.
Still pondering. I like!
On Wed, Apr 5, 2017 at 3:38 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Thanks, Patrick. Now the perils of rewriting. A third go at this snap
> follows.
>
> Cut 3
>
> I cut myself today.
> The empty green ghee tin looked useful.
> Why not rinse it out?
>
> Yikes. Surprised by sharp in sink suds.
> Internal, infernal metal edge.
> Warm water masked slash to right thumb.
>
> Circum-grip withdrawn digit with left hand
> to stem before it began, the rich red flow.
> But rupture will not be denied.
>
> Hackable husks over blood rivers,
> we pump out opinions, pound about,
> always only one breach from splatter.
>
> bw
> 5.4.17
>
> Bill
>
> On Wed, 5 Apr 2017 at 5:16 PM, Patrick McManus <
> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Hi Bill thanks the perils of washing up and pouring out opinions -my
> > shed is full of maybe useful jars and tins
> >
> >
> > On 04/04/2017 23:37, Bill Wootton wrote:
> > > I cut myself today
> > > Surprised by sharp
> > > in sink suds
> > >
> > > The green ghee tin
> > > looked useful
> > > Why not wash it out
> > >
> > > Warm water masked
> > > the slash to right thumb
> > > Infernal internal metal edge
> > >
> > > Quick withdrawal
> > > Circumgrip with left hand
> > > to stem before it began
> > >
> > > the rich red flow
> > > But rupture will not
> > > be denied its outflow
> > >
> > > All of us, pumping out
> > > opinions, pounding about,
> > > only so many blood rivers
> > >
> > > and sub-rivers,
> > > one breach from
> > > clearing out.
> > >
> > > bw
> >
>
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