I like that doubled over (sure) too, Andrew. But not so suer of the 2 ‘as’s so close to one another. It does catch a moment nicely.
Doug
> On Apr 12, 2017, at 10:02 AM, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> My striking line unit for me:
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> "head and over heard"
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> Which tune from West Side Story?
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> Barry
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