Like the opening three stannzas, Andrew and the venacular expression in
line 10, but line 11, 'and throws' jars for me and not sure of the final
4-line stanza.
Bill
On Sat, 3 Dec 2016 at 10:34 AM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
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> Well, they’re snappish, in their way, for sure. Neatly caught, Andrew.
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> Doug
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> > On Dec 2, 2016, at 4:20 PM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > Yep, now you can see it. Thanks for your sleuth work! The exhibition was
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> > small but extremely varied!.
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> > Another 'snap' :
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> >
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> > in Wangaratta Library
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> > four ladies
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> > playing cards
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> > poets playing
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> > their hands
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> > in Dewey order
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> >
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> > they keep their voices
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> > down so as
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> > not to disturb readers
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> >
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> > "I've done my dash!"
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> > and throws
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> > her hand in
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> > they cut once
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> > and shuffle again
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> > just like poets
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> > behind them
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> >
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> > On 3 December 2016 at 06:54, Patrick McManus <
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> > wrote:
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> >> https://www.google.co.uk/search?hl=en&site=imghp&tbm=isch&
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> >> source=hp&biw=1366&bih=638&q=Yardena+Kunulkar%27s+winning+
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> >> entry+in+The+BLAKE+Art+Prize+2016%2C+&oq=Yardena+Kunulkar%
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> >> 27s+winning+entry+in+The+BLAKE+Art+Prize+2016%2C+&gs_l=
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> >> img.12...5769.5769.0.7884.1.1.0.0.0.0.53.53.1.1.0....0...
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> >> 1ac.2.64.img..0.0.0.4ft1c-3nDJo
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> >>
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> >> cheers P looks like very low firing??
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> >> http://www.smh.com.au/entertainment/art-and-design/artist-
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> >> yardena-kurulkar-named-blake-prize-2016-winner-20160212-gmshdo.html
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> >>
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> >>
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> >> On 02/12/2016 10:43, Andrew Burke wrote:
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> >>> Yardena Kunulkar's winning entry in The BLAKE Art Prize 2016,
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> >>>
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> >>
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> >
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> > --
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> > Andrew
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> > http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
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> > Books available through Walleah Press
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> > http://walleahpress.com.au
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
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> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
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> Venerable Optimist
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> He saw the dark as a ragged garment
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> spread out to air.
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> Through its rents and moth-holes
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> the silver light came pouring.
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> Denise Levertov
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