I like it, too. Its form is a charm bracelet, the images of firelight
sparking off each other.
Andrew
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On 2 December 2015 at 08:12, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Thank you so much, Doug! Means a lot.
>
> On Tue, Dec 1, 2015 at 2:11 PM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > Beautiful, Sheila.
> >
> > I like especially that second verse, its continual moves…
> >
> > & the air-iness throughout…
> >
> > Doug
> > > On Dec 1, 2015, at 10:55 AM, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> > >
> > > Hot Breath of the Firelight
> > >
> > > If not forced
> > > to move,
> > > the swivel
> > > will elapse
> > >
> > > Saplings depict
> > > branch-at-a-time
> > > viewing of a sense
> > > of reach
> > >
> > > As castanets clobber
> > > arbitrary air
> > > and homophones
> > > are grabbed mid-air
> > >
> > > Serene new flair
> > > infiltrates the humidity
> > > fares poorly 'til
> > > deliverance resumes each year
> > >
> > > Sheila E. Murphy
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation
> 2
> > (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> >
> > Done in by creation itself.
> >
> > I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> > The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> > We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
> >
> > Robert Kroetsch.
> >
>
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