Bill yes that feeling -and sometimes dependant on mood -Andrew's comment feels like a steamroller -about treating the feeling -which is different from the poem -or summat cheers P now heading to snap (hopefully)
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Bill Wootton
Sent: 25 November 2015 01:14
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Subject: Re: The hollow
Yeh, probably right, Andrew. This was not a shaped poem by any means nor an argument. Just a snap of an internal feeling sometimes.
On Wednesday, November 25, 2015, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Then, put them aside,
> praise them for their focus
> and turn your lights
> on high beam for
> your journey ahead.
> On 25 November 2015 at 09:14, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
> > That gaping gap in the guts feeling
> > when someone tells of what they have been doing or next intend to do
> > and it all sounds like a level of focus you have never had and never
> > will.
> > bw