Yes, Lawrence, intrigued is a healthy response! Andrew
On 16 September 2015 at 22:58, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Funny, I've just come in from chatting to a friend about a third -- now
> dead - and ourselves; and all that might add up to us all living in the
> invisible in some ways... Intriguing! & I am happy to have intrigued
>
> Thanks
>
> L
>
> On 16 September 2015 at 15:45, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > Open, & the spaces as time, as listing a kind of length of time passing,
> > it feels like.
> >
> > that’s the ‘a while’ at work throughout the rest as I feel it, Lawrence.
> a
> > vagueness in the long term relation…suggested. Suggested, to me, because
> > finally the person(s) seem to live in the invisible, or the hidden (as
> > emotion?)..
> >
> > in other words, this keeps intriguing…
> >
> > Doug
> > On Sep 15, 2015, at 10:53 PM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> > > looking at a lover
> > >
> > > carefully a while
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > her lips drooling
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > there was a vagueness
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > anything'd be scared
> > >
> > > or scarred
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > small shoulders
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > wanting to speak emphatically
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > face as if stained bloodily
> > >
> > > breaking out
> > >
> > > through some curtaining
> > >
> > > near invisibility
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> >
> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation
> 2
> > (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> >
> > Done in by creation itself.
> >
> > I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> > The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> > We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
> >
> > Robert Kroetsch.
> >
>
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