Thank you, Patrick and Andrew
L
On 16 September 2015 at 09:59, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Yes, intriguing ... That's the right word, Sheila. I'll go back to it
> later!!!
>
> Andrew
>
> On 16 September 2015 at 15:59, Patrick McManus <
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> > L thanks P
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> > Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> > Sent: 16 September 2015 05:53
> > To: [log in to unmask]
> > Subject: Charcoal sketch
> >
> > looking at a lover
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> > carefully a while
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> >
> > her lips drooling
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> > there was a vagueness
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> > anything'd be scared
> >
> > or scarred
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> > small shoulders
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> > wanting to speak emphatically
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> > face as if stained bloodily
> >
> > breaking out
> >
> > through some curtaining
> >
> > near invisibility
> >
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