Ah, great responses - thank you all. I am in the mood to play on! But I
still haven't written a new short story ... Too much of a domestic life.
Thanks again -
Andrew
On 2 August 2015 at 06:40, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Andrew just back from holiday !!when I have recovered would like to add my
> tuppence worth at first forme looks bit 'scattered' but maybe that's how I
> am at the moment
> best wishes Patrick
>
> -----Original Message----- From: Andrew Burke
> Sent: Thursday, July 30, 2015 3:46 PM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: apres snap
>
> I'd love some feedback on the following, if you have time.
>
> .....
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> Life is a hit album,
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> concept pending.
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>
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> As spring dusts off
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> the holding yards,
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> North stays steady in a storm.
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>
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> We plan
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> but rarely complete.
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>
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> It’s a game of millimetres,
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> of a bee’s tit. Where
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> you came from
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>
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> takes you to where
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> you go: *turn *
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> *to us with confidence.*
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>
>
> - Andrew Burke
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