LOOK
that cold
bleak morning
facing soon
becoming an
octogenarian
he took
a long hard
critical look
at himself
in the cruel
unforgiving
fly specked
cracked mirror
with it's harsh
bright neon
overhead light
and was forced
reluctantly
to admit
how really
absolutely
terrific he
looked
pmcmanus
r814
I rather enjoyed using the clichés here -do they work?
then giving unexpected finish :-)
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