Tell us, Jill, whether the line breaks did their job still…?
I seem to hear a performer making strong use of pauses
and letting the spaces of parkland and carpark prompt
several notions verging on the devotional
Max in Seattle
where they say compoast
On Apr 21, 2015, at 20:02, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> OK, trying to de-lurk this week, due to the call-out.
>
> Here's something local (not sure how it will come across in your
> emails as there are a number of indents - thus the line breaks may
> seem odd):
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> WALKING, WITHOUT LOOKING … ?
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> _- SEMIDEVOTIONAL_
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> All around and
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> into the coming space
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> of parkland
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> more than notion
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> with its white gravel
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> little heaps of trees
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> gums, almonds
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> bird-noise, fight
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> around nesting, nativity
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> walking within conversation
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> notions of civics
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> and wildness
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> not quite
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> but anyway, green
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> where parking spaces
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> are not
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>
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> there are ways out of
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> decomposition, mistakes
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> when seen
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>
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> without or within weather
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> its million year
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> rime
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> birds at ground level, collect
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> scatter
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> recomposing mulch under branches
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> someone
> forgot
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> and water, also devotional
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> awaited
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> ________________________
> Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
> To:
> Cc:
> Sent:Tue, 21 Apr 2015 10:14:07 +0100
> Subject:tomorrow is snaps day for those who can still write!!
>
> SNAPS
> You can do it!
> Take heart
> -take a pen
> -take paper
> (or clay tablet for some here!)
> let it flow flood the web!!
> Glorious tsunami cresting
> you are amongst friends
> (more or less)
> Not sure of
> Bircumshaw
> don't be shy!!
> Be proud!
> Write!!
> Bloody write!
>
> Cheers P'D'Hacktaster
> Oops nearly missed the plain text thingybobs
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