I get the slow movement too, Jill.
Bill
On 23/04/2015, at 10:15 AM, Jill Jones wrote:
> Thanks, Doug. What I was aiming for - sound, movement.
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> J
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> On 23/04/2015, at 12:40 AM, Doug Barbour wrote:
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>> It looks fine to me, Jill
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>> & sounds it too, that slow moving through...
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>> Doug
>> On Apr 21, 2015, at 9:02 PM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>> OK, trying to de-lurk this week, due to the call-out.
>>>
>>> Here's something local (not sure how it will come across in your
>>> emails as there are a number of indents - thus the line breaks may
>>> seem odd):
>>>
>>> WALKING, WITHOUT LOOKING … ?
>>>
>>> _- SEMIDEVOTIONAL_
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> All around and
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>>> into the coming space
>>>
>>> of parkland
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>>> more than notion
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>>> with its white gravel
>>>
>>> little heaps of trees
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>>> gums, almonds
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>>> bird-noise, fight
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>>> around nesting, nativity
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>>>
>>> walking within conversation
>>>
>>> notions of civics
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>>> and wildness
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>>>
>>>
>>> not quite
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>>> but anyway, green
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>>> where parking spaces
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>>> are not
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>>>
>>>
>>> there are ways out of
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>>> decomposition, mistakes
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>>> when seen
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>>>
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>>> without or within weather
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>>> its million year
>>>
>>> rime
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> birds at ground level, collect
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>>> scatter
>>>
>>> recomposing mulch under branches
>>>
>>> someone
>>> forgot
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>>>
>>>
>>> and water, also devotional
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>>>
>>>
>>> awaited
>>>
>>>
>>> ________________________
>>> Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
>>>
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
>>> To:
>>> Cc:
>>> Sent:Tue, 21 Apr 2015 10:14:07 +0100
>>> Subject:tomorrow is snaps day for those who can still write!!
>>>
>>> SNAPS
>>> You can do it!
>>> Take heart
>>> -take a pen
>>> -take paper
>>> (or clay tablet for some here!)
>>> let it flow flood the web!!
>>> Glorious tsunami cresting
>>> you are amongst friends
>>> (more or less)
>>> Not sure of
>>> Bircumshaw
>>> don't be shy!!
>>> Be proud!
>>> Write!!
>>> Bloody write!
>>>
>>> Cheers P'D'Hacktaster
>>> Oops nearly missed the plain text thingybobs
>>>
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>> Douglas Barbour
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>> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/
>> http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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>> Latest books:
>> Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
>> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
>> Recording Dates
>> (Rubicon Press)
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>> If once a man indulges himself in murder, very soon he comes to think little of robbing; and from robbing he comes next to drinking and sabbath-breaking, and from that to incivility and procrastination.
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>> Thomas De Quincey
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