There was a band in the 80s called Was (not Was), Pat.
> On 24 Apr 2015, at 9:38 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> ((((h)e (had)a(b(a)d) (ca)se))(of ((br)ack(ett)ing)))):-))))))))))))) (P)
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Andrew Burke
> Sent: 24 April 2015 09:11
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Tire Swing (Wing)
>
> Like, but am also an anti-brackets person :-)
>
> Andrew
>
>> On 24 April 2015 at 03:22, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> Thanks, Patrick. Good ideas. You join another reader of mine who gets
>> after me re: those brackets. I think I might be wise to listen to what you
> say.
>> Will inspect this little item and take this seriously!
>> Thank you!
>>
>> On Thu, Apr 23, 2015 at 10:01 AM, Patrick McManus <
>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>>> Enjoyed this last verse seems not fitting??different? or perhaps
>>> leave
>> out
>>> 'stacked' what's with the brackets??cheers old P
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics
>>> [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Sheila Murphy
>>> Sent: 23 April 2015 07:18
>>> To: [log in to unmask]
>>> Subject: Tire Swing (Wing)
>>>
>>> Alongside (stride
>>> rest softens
>>> to the west
>>> things matter
>>>
>>> openly away
>>> (stray fast
>>> to hinge upon
>>> (and sing away
>>>
>>> the sting of fast
>>> asleep (the tension
>>> falters last
>>> before awake time
>>>
>>> gravity comes
>>> framed with
>>> fracas stacked unevenly
>>> against (the odds
>>>
>>> Sheila E. Murphy
>>>
>>
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>
>
> --
> Andrew
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