I was quite pleased with the word.
Third line is ambiguous. Only needs to be the fourth word
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On 21 March 2015 at 08:07, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> L,
>
> I like 'undisagree' as a finale and the opening stanza and 'at war, in
> small' particularly. Won't get into the 'its' controversy again.
>
> B
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> On 19/03/2015, at 3:47 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
>
> > They stare at each other concentratedly
> >
> > and intensely. They might be having sex
> >
> > if only their faces were visible.
> >
> >
> >
> > They are at war, in small, over the costs
> >
> > of last night's supper: Who paid for whom?
> >
> > Each is thinking of hitting its lover.
> >
> >
> >
> > She's just cross; but he's becoming nervous
> >
> > and shuffles his big arse on the chair loudly,
> >
> > farting as he does so. It makes her laugh.
> >
> >
> >
> > Each sees the other as ridiculous
> >
> > and he laughs back, avoiding humility.
> >
> > Later, much later, they'll undisagree.
> >
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