Bill it reads differently for me without the ampersand -but personally I
would prfer just 'and' also it relates nicely to the second verse -but what
do I know anyway -now to attempt to disconnect my ancient washine? Washing !
P battling on
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Sent: 29 January 2015 06:55
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Subject: Re: snap 28/01/15
Neat, Doug. Is the ampersand necessary?
> On 29 Jan 2015, at 7:19 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> a casual glance &
> caught under
> the incandescents
> her long hair shifts
> shadow lines flow
> up & down the compacted strands
> Douglas Barbour
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> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> that we are only
> as we find out we are
> Charles Olson