Ah, I see Max’s reply contains something of the lineation I suspected might have been you original conception, Lawrence.
It seems to make more sense that way I think
Doug
On Jan 1, 2015, at 9:14 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Do you mean more spread out?
> Maybe.
> I'd probably say it slowly, sort of spacing
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> and then - more clues?
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> clues to what?
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> On 1 January 2015 at 15:52, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> needs more space, Lawrence? -
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>> *Silver point*
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>> a world that's paradoxical
>> abounding in reflection
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>> sauce for vision
>> that turns rock into beams of fire
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>> in most ironic revolutionary terms
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>> [intriguing,voice-able, but I'd like more clues]
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>> [Max]
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>> On Jan 2, 2015, at 1:42 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
>> wrote:
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>>> *Silver point*
>>> a world that's paradoxical abounding in reflection
>>> sauce for vision
>>> that turns rock into beams of firein most ironic revolutionary terms
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