I like the sarcasm/cynicism leading to black comedy of these, Tim. & the sudden torques of tone & language. And interesting, laconic, ‘I’ posited as speaker throughout, how it stands outside itself, commenting...
Are there a couple of typos? Or do you mean to have a few grammatical flaws?
Doug
On Nov 28, 2014, at 8:14 AM, Tim Allen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> 4 poems from my Insider Art sequence up on Stride.
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> Have a gander.
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> Cheers
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> Tim
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> www.stridemagazine.co.uk
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Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
that we are only
as we find out we are
Charles Olson
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