Hi Sheila,
The interplay was what I was aiming for in the poem, so your reaction
to it is most appreciated. There was a particular occasion (or piece
of news I had received) which is a background to the poem, not that
anyone needs to know, but I was hoping it somehow worked for a
personal as well as poet reason.
many thanks,J
________________________Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
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Jill, I'm late in saying how much I admire that you have done in this
poem.
The progression of imagery with commentary laced through always
visually
and palpably alive, holds very well in my perception.
Very rewarding piece.
Thanks, Sheila
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