Yes; especially liked ‘nosing // amongst the stimui’;made sense even to a non-dog person..
Doug
On Oct 28, 2014, at 11:57 PM, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Becoming very real to me!!!!
>
>
> On Tue, Oct 28, 2014 at 9:18 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> Dream whimpering, dream pooping, dream distress. Which is worst, waking
>> distress, dream distress or twixt distress/?
>>
>> Bill
>>
>> On 29/10/2014, at 10:51 AM, Max Richards wrote:
>>
>>> Dream Dog
>>>
>>> In a dream
>>> you can walk only
>>> a dream dog.
>>>
>>> The one whimpering
>>> at the foot of my bed
>>> for breakfast and a walk
>>>
>>> gets me up and out
>>> on my dream walk
>>> with him, nosing
>>>
>>> amongst the stimuli,
>>> the herbs and fungi,
>>> till - yes - he squats -
>>>
>>> oops! - was that
>>> on the bedroom carpet?
>>> I wake distressed -
>>>
>>> of course dream dogs
>>> don’t mess real rooms -
>>> but one move from me
>>>
>>> and the damn
>>> whimpering will
>>> start up again.
>>
>
Douglas Barbour
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