... and that'd be 'rhyme'. You'd reckon poetryetc would autocorrect at least that.
On Thu, Jul 17th, 2014 at 11:30 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Doug, Like Barry, I saw (or heard) three possible readings, equally valid.
> 'Slighting' might become my new
> favourite word for a bit. And thanks, Max, for pointing out the ryhme
> scheme, which eluded me at first.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, Jul 17th, 2014 at 5:02 AM, Barry Alpert
> <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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> > I was enjoying 3 possible ways of reading your text until this
> > visualization just surfaced instead of what initially appeared as 2
> > independent units side-by-side. Barry
> >
> > On Wed, 16 Jul 2014 12:15:39 -0600, Douglas Barbour
> <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> > >in the summer sun
> > > light the paintings
> > > glow as
> > >
> > >never under un
> > > natural lighting
> > > slighting the colours
> > >
> > >so artfully
> > > arranged
> > >
> > >
> > >Douglas Barbour
> > >[log in to unmask]
> > >
> > >Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
> Continuation
> > 2 (UofAPress).
> > >Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> > >
> > >Something else is out there
> > >godamnit
> > >
> > >And I want to hear it
> > >
> > > C.D.Wright
> >
> >
>
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