what about dropping the two occurrences of the?
On 14 May 2014 23:32, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Overnight buds
> on the bare branches green
>
> in a few long days leaves
> will open small
> flags against the blue
>
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
> (UofAPress).
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>
> Something else is out there
> godamnit
>
> And I want to hear it
>
> C.D.Wright
>
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