Rabbits too much bloody work mostly then, Andrew!
Bill
> On 8 May 2014, at 6:24 pm, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Ah, hungry foxes abound in Corowa, raiding the chicken houses and any small
> easy prey.
>
> Andrew
>
>
>> On 8 May 2014 00:36, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> I enjoyed them too, Bill: the tightness mostly.
>>
>> Agree with max though: can you image what 'evidence' is? And I'm not sure
>> you need the 'ly' on 'undoglikely' or else 'undogly' )w/ its undertones)....
>>
>> When its this sharp, we ask for a bit more edge?
>>
>> Doug
>>> On May 7, 2014, at 2:53 AM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>> Foxes? is there anywhere without them?
>>>
>>> My urban park is said to have them -
>>>
>>> 'watch out for the hollow where they all pee - dogs love to wallow
>> there...'
>>>
>>> While enjoying both, I wondered about 'proportions' and 'evidence of
>> transit', words that maybe
>>> weight down the movement.
>>>
>>> best from Max in Melbourne
>>>> On 7 May 2014, at 6:46 pm, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Thanks, Andrew. Foxy up Corowa ways these sharp mornings?
>>>>
>>>> Bill
>>>>
>>>>> On 7 May 2014, at 5:18 pm, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> I enjoyed 'em.
>>>>>
>>>>> Andrew
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> On 7 May 2014 16:39, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks, Pat. You are probably right. I wanted to suggest latent fox
>> power
>>>>>> but perhaps inertia doesn't do it.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On 7 May 2014, at 4:19 pm, Patrick McManus <
>>>>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Bill enjoyed these not sure about title first -does it need inertia ?
>>>>>>> Cheers P
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>>>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
>> On
>>>>>>> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
>>>>>>> Sent: 06 May 2014 22:56
>>>>>>> To: [log in to unmask]
>>>>>>> Subject: Two snaps, one subject
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> 1. Red inertia
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Even-haunched
>>>>>>> cool stepper
>>>>>>> intent
>>>>>>> as a gunslinger.
>>>>>>> Fox.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> 2. Fox
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Inhabiting canine proportions
>>>>>>> moving decidedly undoglikely
>>>>>>> slow sweeping soft stepping
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> from lemon-scented shade
>>>>>>> down stony path in fat rabbit
>>>>>>> wake. Splay tail obliterating
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> evidence of transit. From
>>>>>>> where does all that red
>>>>>>> swagger spring?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> bw
>>
>> Douglas Barbour
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>> Latest books:
>> Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
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>> Recording Dates
>> (Rubicon Press)
>>
>> would you
>>
>> care to be more
>> precise about whatever
>> it is you are
>> saying, I said
>>
>> Bill Manhire
>
>
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> Andrew
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