actually I smudged it a bit more only this morning
it's really quite old and Ive been leaving some of the problems that I
found in this - in that I was avoiding the same (generic) problems in other
pieces
for some reason they are what I am working on now
that isnt what I planned to be doing now but that's the way it is
most of the problematic pieces are being binned as I realise or decide that
the problems are evasions, that the work isnt really that good!
this is okayish, I think
L
On 14 May 2014 17:29, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> A sharp sketch, L, & fixed, now, in time...
>
> D
> On May 14, 2014, at 7:07 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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> > palms queues
> >
> > a worried man, perhaps, looking over his glasses at me, a short while
> ago,
> > when I sat in this, which, I suppose, is a reception chair
> >
> > looking at money; *seems* worried; just now; cubic inches of notes in
> > dulled multicolour; and an adding machine, which he taps at random
> >
> > my love, drawn and tired, this and that looking, a bird
> >
> > woman with chemical-gold hair and silver shoes
> >
> > anxious woman in smart black pleated skirt and white silk blouse;
> handsome;
> > wedding ring; stockings -- it's thirty-nine degrees -- sandles with one
> and
> > a half inch heels; face taut with temporary concern showing the
> structure;
> > gold plate bangles; thirty-five perhaps; but, now, as she turns, and as
> she
> > pulls at the door, more likely forty, and may be more
> >
> > tall man in jeans
> >
> > woman in dress of the geometric period
> >
> > on the wall, great bank notes of the past, I suppose, in frames; visa
> > travellers cheques no apostrophe; hand-written note in Greek saying
> closed
> >
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> it is you are
> saying, I said
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