Thanks, Pat. You are probably right. I wanted to suggest latent fox power but perhaps inertia doesn't do it.
> On 7 May 2014, at 4:19 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Bill enjoyed these not sure about title first -does it need inertia ?
> Cheers P
>
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> Subject: Two snaps, one subject
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> 1. Red inertia
>
> Even-haunched
> cool stepper
> intent
> as a gunslinger.
> Fox.
>
>
> 2. Fox
>
> Inhabiting canine proportions
> moving decidedly undoglikely
> slow sweeping soft stepping
>
> from lemon-scented shade
> down stony path in fat rabbit
> wake. Splay tail obliterating
>
> evidence of transit. From
> where does all that red
> swagger spring?
>
> bw
>
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