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It started out as being a sequence of interjections. I even had that with
the title until I decided that it made no sense. It wasn't that it wasn't
bullet points, just that wasn't where I was coming from.
Obviously though it was read like that. Reflecting on that, I decided that
it was ok if it were read as bullet points. It's a while back now, but
that's I remember it. (I'm going through my unpublished and uncollected
poems, no matter how long it takes me, and taking a new path through them
to pick up the ones that my own filing "methodology" has missed - hence the
jump from one thing to another of my recent postings)
L
On 12 March 2014 14:54, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Sort of like Bullet Points, Lawrence, & works that way for me...
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> Doug
> On Mar 12, 2014, at 6:45 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
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> > - how many nights I've listened to her wailing
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> > - houses crammed by profuse vocabularies
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> > - voices and tiredness inform each other
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> > - I have heard them call before, and before that
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> > - nothing new is ever said
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> > - insubstantiality conversing
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> > - spherical, tumbling, vacuous
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> > - bird lands on beach, pecks grain of sand
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> > - wired nations, frogs mating
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> > - puffballs on a wind
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> > - absorbed in the one and lonely
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
> Recording Dates
> (Rubicon Press)
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> Swept snow, Li Po,
> by dawn's 40-watt moon
> to the road that hies to office
> away from home.
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