thank you, Doug
I am an intuitive fisherman who casts where the knowledgeable fisherman
kindly point out that I have no chance
I am often successful, but it upsets me, even though I only fish to eat I
am much happier when the knowledgeable fishermen give me their cast offs
I'm glad you think I made a poem out of that angst!
it makes the seas seem less incarnadine
L
On 5 March 2014 16:55, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> A heavy landing, it feels like, Lawrence, & that's meant as praise, so
> much so quickly..
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> Doug
> On Mar 5, 2014, at 4:22 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
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> > *landed fish*
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> > hearing
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> > the only sound
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> > collapsing
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> > through several orifices
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> > a large slowness
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> > left unfinished
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