On 2/26/2014 6:27 PM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> ditto Doug.
>
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> On 27 February 2014 03:59, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Though I tend to lov e allusions to Lovecraft etc, I think Lawrence is
>> right:
>>
>> End with 'What do you think when you think of me?'
>>
Clearly the change improves it. I don't have to hit a reader over the
head to get the "message" across, do I?
K
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