but the first line itself sings
and it is hardly an asemic singing but an important element of the factual
I don't think Canadian vowels are so different to mine in this
and the pattern of vowels is quite different but just as pleasing in the
second line
it was the singing itself that first drew me to Seeger
L
On 29 January 2014 20:33, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Like this too, Doug. Wonder however whether opening line with its clever
> s's should remain. The singing is celebrated in the third and fourth lines.
> Could then begin on 'unafraid'.
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> Bill
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> > On 30 Jan 2014, at 3:23 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
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> > songs sung with sangfroid
> > unafraid on so many barricades
> > barring none from joining the chorus
> > he sang joy & justice for self & everyone
> > that freedom ring a/rising
> > continues
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> > Douglas Barbour
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> > Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
> > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
> > Recording Dates
> > (Rubicon Press)
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> > Swept snow, Li Po,
> > by dawn's 40-watt moon
> > to the road that hies to office
> > away from home.
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> > Lorine Niedecker
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