Good poem, Max. Very enjoyable - and thought-provoking. (Now, where*
should*they spread my ashes?)
On 30 January 2014 06:27, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> thanks Doug, and others - staggers! good word.
> I still recall my frisson when first hearing that Tennyson's friend
> Hallam, having died young, was published posthumously in a book called -
>
> Hallam's Remains.
>
> M
>
> On 30/01/2014, at 3:51 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>
> > Aside from enjoying it as the others did, Max, I think your break from
> the 3 line stanza works well here. these couplets, then staggers, carry the
> tone well...
> >
> > Doug
> > On Jan 28, 2014, at 11:58 PM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >
> >> My posthumous poem
> >>
>
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