well I am happy with that
especially after my faffing around with the layout
it's an abstraction from a very peculiar event
yet finally your response is about right - I mean that positively
I achieved my aim then, at least to a degree
thanks
& black and white is good
that's where I started
("there's more colour in black and white" B Cobbing)
L
On 22 January 2014 17:05, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> taken on the run, Lawrence.
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> strikes me as good old b&w snapshot, maybe a local newspaper...
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> Doug
> On Jan 22, 2014, at 4:38 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
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> > a child glimmers in broiderie anglaise
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> > through fluorescent light,
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> > sucking her thumb,
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> > bumped over uneven ground
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> > by a beautiful down
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> > in the mouth mother,
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> > in a cap marked "Carnation"
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