Hi Bill hot out your way!!
cheers thanks for comment much appreciated rather liked the questioning
pause pointing out as part of their confusion -will reread!!
Once again some else has got my snap but it has not arrived here to the
great sadness of an elderly person
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Bill Wootton
Sent: 15 January 2014 11:04
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Subject: Re: pat snaps 610 _->^<-_
Pat you could leave out the word/line 'questioning' and do no damage to the
poem. Not sure how much damage granddad suffered.
Bill
> On 15 Jan 2014, at 9:27 pm, Patrick McManus
<[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> TRIP
>
> when he dear
> old granddad
> booked a trip
> to Switzerland
> to Dignitas
> nobody
> in the family
> felt up to
> questioning
> pointing out
> that he had
> bought a
> return ticket
>
>
> pmcmanus
> r433
> Wednesday, 15 January 2014
>
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