Well, I thank you for doing so, Barry. Love that turn from penultimate to last line...
Doug
On Dec 11, 2013, at 5:32 AM, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> YES SALLY POTTER
>
>
> Yes it all relates
> except when
> she gets back you'll be out.
>
> So looked up to you
> and hear you protest my
> leaving
> living cell the source of wonder
> your point of view.
>
> Barry Alpert / Silver Spring MD US / 9-7-10>>12-11-13 (7:27AM)
>
> While searching for details in my journals for an entirely different purpose, I stumbled upon a rough draft written while watching Sally Potter's feature film YES for the first time. Quickly realized that the draft required very little revision, so I decided to reward myself by taking a break from my onerous task and completing my acrostic half-sonnet.
>
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