thanks Bill and Doug, especially.
Does the advice point to present tense throughout or past throughout?
Is there a model I can work to?
Max
On 14/11/2013, at 4:31 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> I like it & the final few stanzas, as others have said, Max.
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> The loss of words with the discovery of memory anyway...
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> But I think you need to check your tenses & get them straighter throughout?
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> On Nov 12, 2013, at 3:55 PM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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