Worked for me, Pat, the words stepping down the page and the droll payoff.
> On 13 Nov 2013, at 10:30 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Bill thanks for reading and cheery comment I did wonder if it was a poem P
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> Sent: 13 November 2013 08:34
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> Subject: Re: pat snap 603? _-(*)-__-(*)-__-(*)-_Wednesday, 13 November 2013
> Excellent, Pat.
>>> On 13 Nov 2013, at 7:30 pm, Patrick McManus
>> <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> DEAD LINE
>> took on
>> a new
>> Wednesday, 13 November 2013