'audio hissing sound track of a dull morning'
lovely p
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
Sent: 02 October 2013 10:58
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Subject: Re: domestics - don't think Ive shown this one before, pardon if I
have
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On 02/10/2013, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Like
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> On Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 02 October 2013 10:21
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> Subject: Re: domestics - don't think Ive shown this one before, pardon
> if I have
>
> as the puncher might say, "Wha' abou' i'?" You like?
>
> L
>
> On 02/10/2013, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> That frame slippage!
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
>> On Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
>> Sent: 02 October 2013 07:53
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: domestics - don't think Ive shown this one before, pardon if
>> I have
>>
>> Punches her in the face, breaking it up, the problems of mankind
>> something personal; her mouth turns backwards flame-glowing to a
>> dislocated grin, a smashed mirror.
>>
>> I cannot breathe. Liquid evaporating, trying to sound casual,
>> stiffening her pain.
>> The picture of her sticks at frame slippage, straddling two images
>> held apart slightly
>>
>> audio hissing sound track of a dull morning.
>> An observer the observer stays calm
>> in stray silence, making that chance a pretence of will; pulling
>> away; remaining visible in the midst of a deadly room in their mad
>> household throughout harmful streets in a clever town.
>>
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