As they are presented in this sequence. Yes, it is the police term.
You ask 2 interesting questions. Ive been thinking about the frame
slippage overnight; and I think probably not. I like the one instance,
held; but I'll keep in in mind, But you are right about deadly. That
needs work. Thanks
L
On 02/10/2013, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Domestics (& that's the police term no?) are harsh, as you see them,
> Lawrence.
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> Should there be more of that frame slippage than the one repeat? And I
> wondered if 'deadly' is somehow too, we;; I dont know; I thought 'dead' as
> in the emotions etc...
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> Doug
> On 2013-10-02, at 12:53 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Punches her in the face, breaking it up,
>> the problems of mankind something personal;
>> her mouth turns backwards flame-glowing
>> to a dislocated grin, a smashed mirror.
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>> I cannot breathe. Liquid evaporating,
>> trying to sound casual, stiffening her pain.
>> The picture of her sticks at frame slippage,
>> straddling two images held apart slightly
>>
>> audio hissing sound track of a dull morning.
>> An observer the observer stays calm
>> in stray silence, making that chance a pretence
>> of will; pulling away; remaining visible
>> in the midst of a deadly room in their mad household
>> throughout harmful streets in a clever town.
>>
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