Good poem, good advice. (No ice picks in vicinity.) Andrew
On 20 February 2013 10:12, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Anticipating gangsters, but though they don't show, a shared carpe diem
> manifests. Distinctive closing couplet completes your sonnet--can't recall
> examples of the same usage.
>
> Barry
>
> On Wed, 20 Feb 2013 08:03:31 +1100, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> >An ice pick placed right will kill.
> >But seek to live. Don't wait
> >for the chill tap. You'll
> >die just right when
> >your switch is
> >turned off.
> >
> >All roads lead to the full stop
> >but on the way, words
> >wind, dreams pulse,
> >leaves drop, rare
> >friends talk
> >slow.
> >
> >Sip
> >up.
> >
> >BW
>
--
Andrew
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