is there an opposite of cause? i wonder myself. if not cause, then things happen beside or opposite
matanaka was opposite to karitane - or it was 'over there' from the where of my original observation
the sea between often had a mist just above it (then there was the all-day sea fog, but that's a different poem)
those gulls were always sure, and emerging
thanks for the questions,
J
On 22/02/2013, at 12:08 PM, Bill Wootton wrote:
> If the opposite of cause is uncause or destroy or deny, I'm still getting my head around this sea, Jill, so descibed. Perhaps waves shiver up their offerings? No undertow? I'm hearing and seeing slow movements and like others, I like 'hovery' and that gull emerging so surely.
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> Bill
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> On 22/02/2013, at 12:39 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Matanaka from Karitane
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>> the sea
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>> shivers
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>> cause but not the opposite
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>> slope clearer
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>> late when
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>> there is no evening
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>> halfway down
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>> there is a bush
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>> faint dark streak of a cloud
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>> near the base faint
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>> but distinct path mark
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>> windy in rose
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>> tussock morning glory
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>> palm ryegrass
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>> the pattern
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>> whitecaps
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>> change
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>> current sheer
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>> the cliff
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>> thrown
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>> sound is more
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>> sound death
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>> bird call
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>> identify or simply hear
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>> as you see bright haze
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>> without outline
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>> hovery
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>> and clearest
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>> the black-backed gull
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