Cheers, Barry, Andrew.
Bill
On 20/02/2013, at 12:07 PM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> Good poem, good advice. (No ice picks in vicinity.) Andrew
>
> On 20 February 2013 10:12, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Anticipating gangsters, but though they don't show, a shared carpe diem
>> manifests. Distinctive closing couplet completes your sonnet--can't recall
>> examples of the same usage.
>>
>> Barry
>>
>> On Wed, 20 Feb 2013 08:03:31 +1100, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> An ice pick placed right will kill.
>>> But seek to live. Don't wait
>>> for the chill tap. You'll
>>> die just right when
>>> your switch is
>>> turned off.
>>>
>>> All roads lead to the full stop
>>> but on the way, words
>>> wind, dreams pulse,
>>> leaves drop, rare
>>> friends talk
>>> slow.
>>>
>>> Sip
>>> up.
>>>
>>> BW
>>
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> --
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
> 'Undercover of Lightness'
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> 'Shikibu Shuffle'
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