Good developments,
Is that Hay-on-Wye
or Hay NSW?
[eschew is a disgusting word but maybe OK here]
hay-feverish tishoo
On 11/01/2013, at 9:55 PM, Bill Wootton wrote:
> Thanks, Pat. It is an ex general store and good noshery.
>
> I have taken guidance from regular poetryetcers on the poem, mainly Andrew, and have added a concluding verse now:
>
>
> When in Yea
> straightaway
> hit Marmalades'
> spring-loaded door
>
> Eat a tart
> look at art
> relax your heart
> by a fountain
>
> Drink coffee iced
> fairly priced
> Be enticed
> at Marmalades
>
> Heading back
> are many tracks
> No choices lack
> Try Flowerdale
>
> So eschew Hay
> Calais, Bombay
> Go Yea
> It's affirmative.
>
> Bill Wootton
> 10.1.13
>
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