like it, Lawrence - got into it more this morning - I read it first
late in the day, hot and exhausted by events. Now, relaxed and almost
cool, it comes through to me. Thanks for it ...
Andrew
On 24 January 2013 03:32, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> 'an automatic clamour' really catches up the title, Lawrence.
>
> automatic massed voices I think?
>
> enough mystery remains...
>
> Doug
> On 2013-01-23, at 2:17 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> God, she thought
>>
>> I'm turning into
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>> an automatic clamour,
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>> scientific and viable
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>> *
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>> everyone interrupted
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>> an urge to apologise –
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>> more money, more acclaim, no body
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>> *
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>> half-sang, to dislocate reluctance
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>> *
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>> She looked beautiful.
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>> bad news was softening
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>> a warm wind over horror
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>> till that hissed; and evaporated
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>> overwhelmed - a ball
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>> bounced under a heap or torsos,
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>> banging the bed against a brick wall –
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>> shouts over his shoulder,
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>> so shocked, no male fantasy
>>
>>
>>
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