Jill, I like them both :) Thank you very much!
On Tue, Nov 27, 2012 at 6:53 PM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> should be breathness. but that other word looks kinda OK
>
> J
>
> On 28/11/2012, at 12:19 PM, Jill Jones wrote:
>
> > quite. and on …
> >
> > thanks for this bresathness freshness on a very hot day
> >
> > J
> >
> > On 28/11/2012, at 11:42 AM, Andrew Burke wrote:
> >
> >> I like it just the way it is. It intrigues the upper paddock while
> swinging
> >> on the fence line.
> >> Androo in Harvest time
> >> On 28 November 2012 10:33, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >>
> >>> Bob, you always make it all worthwhile! Yours in honor of mathematics,
> >>> Sheila E
> >>>
> >>> On Tue, Nov 27, 2012 at 4:31 PM, bob grumman <[log in to unmask]
> >>>> wrote:
> >>>
> >>>> Very nice, Sheila. But, oh, the urge it gave
> >>>> me to make "systems (quite
> >>>> systemic, quite
> >>>> voracious, quite)"
> >>>> "systems (quite
> >>>> systemic, quite
> >>>> voracious, quite
> >>>> quite)"
> >>>>
> >>>> But don't do it!
> >>>>
> >>>> Bob
> >>>>
> >>>> -----Original Message----- From: Sheila Murphy
> >>>> Sent: Tuesday, November 27, 2012 5:54 PM
> >>>> To: [log in to unmask]
> >>>> Subject: Re: SNAP / Murph
> >>>>
> >>>> Thank you, Stephen. This means a lot, and I shall reflect upon what
> you
> >>> say
> >>>> about the different parts!
> >>>>
> >>>> Best, Sheila
> >>>>
> >>>> On Tue, Nov 27, 2012 at 3:21 PM, Stephen Vincent <
> [log in to unmask]
> >>>>> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> With the exception of not 'getting' the last 4.5 lines of the first
> >>>>> stanza, I love the viola/bow mimetic moves of the rest. The zest,
> >>> Sheila!
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Stephen V
> >>>>>
> >>>>> --- On Tue, 11/27/12, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> From: Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> >>>>> Subject: SNAP / Murph
> >>>>> To: [log in to unmask]
> >>>>> Date: Tuesday, November 27, 2012, 2:02 PM
> >>>>>
> >>>>> always the viola clef im
> >>>>> pinges on alleged neu
> >>>>> tra la laity
> >>>>> be "course" (as my friend
> >>>>> MEP fresh from NJ
> >>>>> would say)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> the lamentations strike
> >>>>> one, with their piercing
> >>>>> volatility
> >>>>> their voice box
> >>>>> shielded
> >>>>> as in hooded
> >>>>> as in and out
> >>>>> of justice
> >>>>> systems (quite
> >>>>> systemic, quite
> >>>>> voracious, quite)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> a momentary symphony,
> >>>>> my train case function
> >>>>> full of extreme unction,
> >>>>> says the friar
> >>>>> so and so and so
> >>>>>
> >>>>> one hears placating melody
> >>>>> by memory in arrears
> >>>>> one's host
> >>>>> age taking
> >>>>> its toll
> >>>>> on
> >>>>> and on and on
> >>>>>
> >>>>> sheila e. murphy
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> --
> >> Andrew
> >> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
> >> 'Undercover of Lightness'
> >> http://walleahpress.com.au/recent-publications.html
> >> 'Shikibu Shuffle'
> >>
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com.au/2012/03/new-from-aboveground-press-shikibu.html
>
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