Hi Jill
Yes
I think it was Doug wrote about it yesterday and I started a long
reply that brought in the Opies and god knows what and then realised
that I was in the wrong editor -- I forward from one to the other at
present and keep doing it. I think I have my own jiscmail server just
to send me messages asking who I am
I was thinking that very few games really do involve originality
you learn the words and the actions and you do them
films may throw this into relief when they become source
anyway this morning I found I hadn't got or couldn't find that
message
i had started to say as I realised that I couldn't send my message
that I had moved on to speaking of the mother; but as I began to
polish the line(s) I realised that I didn't need them or rather that
they got in the way
or rather they began to turn the poem into a moralistic comment
and there's far too much of that already
and I am doing my best not to hum Two little boys by Rolf Harris
thanks / best
L
Jill Jones [log in to unmask] [1]
09:10 (4 hours ago) Reply
to POETRYETC
Ah, that ending, that isn't
On 18/10/2012, at 2:16 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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