Jill thanks enjoyed the short sparse feeling-sort of flicking to the next
line
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
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Sent: 15 August 2012 15:41
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Subject: snap - today's rewrite
Blue light surface
covers memory
of sound with
abundant shadow
no box nor drum
entirely contains
the wandering breath
a song-dreamed open
breathes difficulty
blooms form
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